A great game! The way you have to make the choice to click the next line feels like when you're playing a horror RPG and have to make the choice to walk into the room that you know some creature waits for you. It's agency and inevitability of the medium packaged into one and I really liked it, as well as the way the images complimented the haunting tone of the story. This game really captivated me.
"Like a wall in which an insect lives and gnaws."
a game made for Gothic Novel Jam, 2018
Some readers may find elements of this story disturbing.
Please take particular caution if you are sensitive to any of the following:
Anxiety over infertility
Blurring of reality and fiction
This is a keyboard-playable twine game. Where you see a ~, you can press Spacebar to advance, or use the mouse.
In some sections you will be able to play a sub-game. Use the arrow keys to move around here. However, due to technical restrictions, you will need to click in the game to activate it.
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This is so well done. Also it hits hard. Sending hugs to all the queer peeps, especially the ones struggling with their identity.
"...Man is blind, deaf, fragile - like a wall In which an insect lives and gnaws."
"Each of you builds in secret a temple to my fame; Each one of you in secret has kissed my foul behind;"
Great game i love the ending
This was kind of perfect for me right now. I've been having these exact same kind of conversations in regards to like insecurities with partners and being trans, paranoia about faking people out or being faked out, etc. Yeah, this was amazing, thanks.
I had goosebumps once the glitching started. Great game!
There is an easter egg in a particular Bitsy section. If you're familiar with Bitsy you'll know where it comes from as well.
great game, really love the atmosphere. <3
Holy hell this was FANTASTIC. I expected a depress-a-thon and got something equally terrifying and relatable. Often times horror doesn't get me, but [spoilers] that line about "us" actually made me shout "holy shit" - something The Shining failed to do. Great job!
Slightly off-topic: I found that A Silver Mt. Zion's "Broken Chords Can Sing A Little" made for some fantastic musical accompaniment with this.
Checked this out before playing the sequel, and I gotta say that this pretty awesome. Great writing, aesthetic, and interesting choice in the addition of the mini-game sections. This was well done!
finally played this and it was AMAZING like holy crap!!!!!
oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow oh wow
Pretty deep, dark story and has some nice images to go with it. The depth goes with both the story and the surprising depth of the game as a whole. Those who use space have to go full screen, since the key makes the page move down, but that's not a big problem.
If you're interested, you're welcome to enter our Game Development World Championship, we have a class for jam entries from this year too!
oh my god freya i love this
holy shit HOLY SHIT AAAAH!!! THAT IS SOOOO GOOD!!!!! JUST HOLY SHIT!!! PUT ME ON EDGE AND I FREAKIN' ENJOYED IT WHOA!!!!
God the writing in this one was so good, esp with the art accompanied by it. I just imagined Silent Hill music the whole time. This is totally a fave from you. Also when I clicked the link to ChapelR's LinkKey macro , it led to a broken page. Idk if that's Twine or the page itself. Awesome. 5 stars.
thrilled that you like it! thank you for spotting the bug - turns out it only happens on the itchio hosted version and not when tested from my desktop - but I know how to fix it, thankfully, so I'll update that <3
AAAAAAH THAT WAS SO CHILLING AND GOOD!!!!